Observation of my oral exposition

When I see the video of my oral exposition, I see some mistakes. For example, the pronunciation are not good, I need to inprove that. I repeat the word "Ok". In the video I see Sergi and me very nervous, and nervs are bad ennemy. I think the content of the oral are good, but Sergi and I need some new words, because always say the same, and sometimes don't have any word to say.

The quality of the power point are good, because it's a good suport audiovisual. In general, We don't read so much, because Sergi and I study the oral exposition. I intent to have eye contact to the public, cause for me this is so positive. In the end of the oral, we put a video of one game, World of Warcrat, this is a good point to have the atention of the public. I think, in general, the oral exposition are so good, but I have to improve some thinks. I hope that you have liked!